Storm Raiders – Snippet 1

UNEDITED – This is the first snippet from STORM RAIDERS, the first book in my new series with Michael Anderle called Storms of Magic. The series takes place in the Age of Magic world. The book will be out soon, and in the meantime, follow the Facebook Page, and check out the Rise of Magic books by Chris, Lee, and Michael. Also, Justin Sloan is releasing snippets of his first book in this same world. Check those out here

As a bonus, here’s the map of my little corner of the Age of Magic world. On to the story! 

Abbey rarely went looking for a fight, but fights often came looking for her.

Her father’s blacksmith shop was quiet that morning. She worked the bellows, stoking the fire hot enough to soften the iron so he could hammer it into shape. They performed their tasks silently, with the efficiency of a team that had been working together for many years. Abbey could tell instinctively what her father needed of her, and she did it before he even had a chance to ask.

The bell in the front of the shop chimed as the door opened. Abbey and her father exchanged an annoyed glance—being interrupted at a fire was a pet peeve for both of them, even if it was a paying customer. He took off his gloves and apron, setting them carefully on the workbench, then he sauntered to the front of the shop. Abbey stayed at the bellows so she could tend to the fire, but she had a good angle to see and hear what was going on up front. Her nose wrinkled in annoyance when she saw who it was: Lawrence and his son Olaf.

Lawrence put his hands on the counter and leaned forward, glaring at Abbey’s father. “Morning, Benjamin. I assume it’s ready?”

Benjamin grabbed a long object wrapped in oilcloth and set it down in front of Lawrence. “Indeed it is. Made to your exact specifications.”

Lawrence unrolled the cloth, his long, knobby fingers working with surprising deftness. Olaf peered excitedly over his father’s shoulder. Soon, the iron sword inside the cloth was exposed. It gleamed in the light as Lawrence picked it up and inspected it. He let out a displeased grumble.

Abbey shook her head. She’d checked the sword herself the night before, and she knew it was perfect. It was well balanced, beautifully decorated with the symbols Lawrence had requested, and sharp enough that a man could shave with it. Granted, it wasn’t quite the equal of her father’s sword, which hung behind the counter, but few swords were.

But this was the city of Holdgate. Grumbling about the product was an expected part of the negotiation process. As was what came next.

“I suppose it will do.” Lawrence’s voice dripped with reluctance as if he was granting Benjamin a favor in accepting this subpar weapon. He reached for the coin purse at his belt. “Twenty iron, then?”

Now Benjamin grimaced. He hated these games, Abbey knew, but after sixteen years in Holdgate, he’d learned to accept them as necessary to doing business here. “Lawrence, you know the agreed upon price was forty.”

“Was it?” He made a show of inspecting the weapon again. “Perhaps for a well-made blade. But this…” His voice trailed off. He clearly couldn’t think of any specific complaint.

Abbey wondered what would happen next. Often the customer would demand negotiation by combat at this stage, but a single glance at the two men on either side of the counter revealed that would not be a smart move on Lawrence’s part. Thick muscles stood out on Benjamin’s arms, and his experience with swords went far beyond making them.

Lawrence, on the other hand, looked like he’d have trouble battling a stiff wind. Like most men in Holdgate, he was a few inches taller than Benjamin, but he didn’t have the usual stocky build of most Holdgatesmen. Abbey knew Benjamin would break Lawrence in half if it came to combat.

Lawrence didn’t take his eyes off the blade when he spoke again. “The sword is a gift to Olaf for his eighteenth birthday. I’ll tell you what. He’ll fight you for the blade. If you win, we’ll pay the ridiculous fee you quoted. But if he wins, twenty is the price.”

From where Abbey stood, she could see Olaf grinning dumbly at Benjamin. Unlike his father, Olaf was sturdy Holdgate stock. He was a few inches taller than Lawrence and nearly as well-muscled as Benjamin. He’d have no shortage of offers of employment on the storm ships in the coming months, Abbey knew.

Benjamin looked the kid over. “I don’t think so.”

Lawrence cackled in surprise. “I never thought I’d see the day Benjamin of Arcadia was afraid to face a Holdgate whelp. Getting old, are you?”

Abbey gripped the bellows to keep herself from marching over there and teaching Lawrence some manners.

The hint of a smile played on Benjamin’s lips. “Perhaps I am. Young Olaf deserves a real challenge. He doesn’t want to fight an old man like me.”

Lawrence set the sword down on the oilcloth. “Excellent. We’ll be taking it for twenty iron, then.”

“Sure. But you’ll have to earn it at that price. You can have it for twenty if Olaf can defeat my daughter.”

Now it was Abbey’s turn to smile.

From PT – So that’s a brief introduction to our heroine, Abbey. Snippet #2 is out now, complete with a cover reveal. Check it out here.

Rise of Magic

Any sufficiently advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic…” Arthur C. Clarke 

She didn’t mean to use magic

She didn’t even know she HAD magic

She just wanted to save her brother, who was dying in her arms.

Accused of using illegal magic, and sentenced to a cruel death at the hands of the city’s guards, Hannah has no choice but to trust in the aid of a strange old man who wields unimaginable power.

The Founder has returned to correct the wrongs of unjust. But to do that, he needs Hannah, a young woman from the city slums. She has a key to unlocking a power even greater than his own–if she can only learn to trust herself and the magic flowing within her blood.

Restriction is a fantasy set in the far future, where magic and monsters ravage the land of Irth and only the strong survive.

Set on the foundation laid by the Kurtherian Gambit Series, Restriction tells an entirely new story in the Age of Magic–and of the heroes and villains who battle for control of its destiny.

Read now and Enter the Age of Magic.

4 Replies to “Storm Raiders – Snippet 1”

  1. So, the Rise of Magic, Shades of Light, and Storm Raiders are all in the same time period? After BA and Michael have gone on to better things? Are they all happening at the same time? Can we get a map showing where the Irth lands are in relation to each other?

    1. Yes, you are correct. Same timeframe as Shades of Light and Rise of Magic. Great idea about the larger world map. You can see a little of Roneland (from Shades of Light) in the bottom left corner of this map, but it would be fun to see the whole world at once.

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